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So Beautiful

August

2021

Patricia Bishop and Jesse Navarro
So Beautiful
by Patricia Bishop and Jesse Navarro ©2021

V1
She used to dream of being a queen, living happily ever after
Like the books she read about, love, romance and rapture

He used to dream of being a king in a bright shining armor
He’d slay the dragon with his sword, carry her off and save her

Chorus
Life would be so beautiful
Life would be so beautiful
So …….. beautiful
Life would be so beautiful

V2
(Now) The alarm goes off five thirty in the morning
She wakes up the kids while the biscuits are still warming

He takes the dog for a morning run around the block
Hurries home, puts on his uniform, and leaves about 6 o’clock

Chorus
And life is still so beautiful
Life is still so beautiful
So beautiful……
Life is still so beautiful

Bridge
Evening comes, everyone’s home except for one
Thankful prayers at the dinner table
For blessings they’ve been handed
Never taking them for granted

Chorus
Life is still so beautiful
Life is still so beautiful
So ….. beautiful

Tag
And she still dreams …..
He’s her king and she’s his queen
And life is still so beautiful
So beautiful
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Every Day Is Christmas

August

2021

David and Kelly Hanshaw
EVERY DAY IS CHRISTMAS Words and Music by David and Kelly Hanshaw ©2021

Chorus:
EVERY DAY IS CHRISTMAS WHEN I’M WITH YOU
MORNING SUN OF GOLD IN A SKY OF BLUE
ALL THAT I’VE ASKED FOR HAS COME TRUE
EVERY DAY IS CHRISTMAS WHEN I’M WITH YOU
Verse 1:
DOESN’T HAVE TO BE A FIELD OF SNOW
EVERGREEN DRESSED IN LIGHTS THAT GLOW
RIBBON BOWS ON PAPER HOLDIN’ TOYS SO NEW
EVERYDAY IS CHRISTMAS WHEN I’M WITH YOU
Verse 2:
WE DON’T NEED A SPRIG OF MISTLETOE
CAROLERS SINGING ALL THE SONGS THEY KNOW
A SILVER TRAY OF COOKIES LEFT OUT FOR YOU KNOW WHO
EVERYDAY IS CHRISTMAS WHEN I’M WITH YOU
Bridge:
CHRISTMAS COMES JUST ONE DAY A YEAR
I FEEL THE SPIRIT EVERY TIME YOU’RE NEAR
Chorus:
EVERY DAY IS CHRISTMAS WHEN I’M WITH YOU
MORNING SUN OF GOLD IN A SKY OF BLUE
ALL THAT I’VE ASKED FOR HAS COME TRUE
EVERY DAY IS CHRISTMAS WHEN I’M WITH YOU
Tag:
EVERY DAY IS CHRISTMAS
EVERY DAY IS CHRISTMAS
EVERY DAY IS CHRISTMAS WHEN I’M WITH YOU
WITH YOU
EVERY DAY IS CHRISTMAS
EVERY DAY IS CHRISTMAS
EVERY DAY, EVERY DAY, EVERY DAY


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Cinnamon Whisky

August

2021

Zane Nordin
Cinnamon Whisky - Zane Nordin
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Pt 1/Intro (spoken)
"Hey, Bud. I need to talk to you 'bout that girl you've been with."
"I know you really dig her, man, but she ain't no good for you, I'm just sayin'"
"We've seen her kind before, man, she's just using you. She Don't Love You ..."
"She's nothing but Cinnamon Whisky!"
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Pt 2/Lowdown (vocalized)
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She's Cinnamon Whisky
Red Velvet Sin
She's Cold Southern Comfort
Or London Dry Gin
Blue Moons over Bombay
She's Absolut, Malibu
But She's still Cinnamon Whisky
She Don't Love You
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Her favorite restaurant
A table for two
Out on a veranda
With a romantic view
Order Cinnamon Whisky
She'll give you her time
But, when the check comes around
Keep this in mind
She's Cinnamon Whisky
Red Velvet Sin
She's Cold Southern Comfort
London Dry Gin
Blue Moon over Bombay
She's Absolut, Malibu
But She's still Cinnamon Whisky
She Don't Love You
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Pt 3/Conclusion
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Cinnamon Whisky is the Dangerous Kind
She's A Dynamite Number and
She Blows your ... mind
Cinnamon Whisky is a red HOT! time - that's true (You know it's true)
But She's just a Cinnamon Whisky
She Don't Love You!
She's just a Cinnamon Whisky
That girl is Cinnamon Whisky &
We BOTH drank Cinnamon Whisky.
(Spoken) "Sorry 'bout that, man."
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