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January

2022

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Something

Revised

Molli McMills

Intent of Song and what I want from a critique

I was looking for any suggestions from fresh, musical ears! I got those! Thank you!

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Lyrics

                     Something                             
by Molli McMills

V1-I have friends who pray to Jesus, Others who were once believers
     Some bank on the truth,
people taught them in their youth
     Many only worship science, put their faith in self reliance
     As for me I know that I don’t know.
 But even if it turns out to be nothing,
It’s still something

Chorus
Something fills us up,
when we hear our newborn baby’s cry
Something breaks us down,
for the ones we hate to lose
Something makes us keep on trying to pull each other up
Its love ……….and that’s something

V2-Seems we wonder all our lives,
about what happens when we die
Do we simply end? Will I see you again?
Does it matter anyway
when you’re right here with me today
    Holding on to you is never nothing   

Chorus
Something fills us up,
when we hear our newborn baby’s cry
Something breaks us down,
for the ones we hate to lose
Something makes us keep on trying to pull each other up
Its love ……….and that’s something

Bridge
Maybe love is the breath of God
or bits of dust from the stars
No matter where it comes from, it’s the best of who we are

Chorus
Something fills us up,
when we hear our newborn baby’s cry
Something breaks us down
for the ones we hate to lose
Something makes us keep on trying
to pull each other up
It’s love,  love,  love……..
and thats something.

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