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August

2021

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So Beautiful

Patricia Bishop and Jesse Navarro

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Lyrics

So Beautiful
by Patricia Bishop and Jesse Navarro ©2021

V1
She used to dream of being a queen, living happily ever after
Like the books she read about, love, romance and rapture

He used to dream of being a king in a bright shining armor
He’d slay the dragon with his sword, carry her off and save her

Chorus
Life would be so beautiful
Life would be so beautiful
So …….. beautiful
Life would be so beautiful

V2
(Now) The alarm goes off five thirty in the morning
She wakes up the kids while the biscuits are still warming

He takes the dog for a morning run around the block
Hurries home, puts on his uniform, and leaves about 6 o’clock

Chorus
And life is still so beautiful
Life is still so beautiful
So beautiful……
Life is still so beautiful

Bridge
Evening comes, everyone’s home except for one
Thankful prayers at the dinner table
For blessings they’ve been handed
Never taking them for granted

Chorus
Life is still so beautiful
Life is still so beautiful
So ….. beautiful

Tag
And she still dreams …..
He’s her king and she’s his queen
And life is still so beautiful
So beautiful

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